PUNCTUATION AND (RATHER SLOPPY) LOVE

Please punctuate this sentence:

a woman without her man is nothing

Is there more than one way to do this?

Think about it, don’t scroll down yet. Really! Try this letter first:

dear john

i want a man who knows what love is all about you are generous kind thoughtful people who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior you have ruined me for other men i yearn for you i have no feelings whatsoever when were apart i can be forever happy will you let me be yours

jennifer

It’s all a bit dramatic, isn’t it!

Okay, you can scroll down now.

 

 

 

Keep scrolling,

 

 

 

More scrolling coming up.

 

 

 

A woman: without her, man is nothing

OR…

A woman, without her man, is nothing.

 

Now what about that letter?

 

Dear John,

I want a man who knows what love is all about. You are generous, kind, thoughtful. (A bit of poetic licence is taken here with that third comma instead of and.) People who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior. You have ruined me for other men. I yearn for you. I have no feelings whatsoever when we’re apart. I can be forever happy – will you let me be yours?

Jennifer

OR…

Dear John,

I want a man who knows what love is. All about you are generous, kind, thoughtful people who are not like you. Admit to being useless and inferior. You have ruined me. For other men I yearn! For you I have no feelings whatsoever. When we’re apart I can be forever happy. Will you let me be?

Yours (rather overly polite considering what else she has just written!)

Jennifer